
13-10-2008, 01:51 PM
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Join Date: 09-12-2006
Location: London, UK
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Act of Sedition
Finally started the short story. More or less drafted the whole first page intro/prologue thingy. Theres just a little bit before the end of it that needs some filling.
It's split into three parts (not including the intro).
The first is the protagonist before/on his to to his execution.
The second is a flashback to when he was relieved of command/arrested (a part of which forms the intro).
The third deals with his escape and his choice to rebel.
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~LeoxStryker
So give me reason,
To prove me wrong,
To wash this memory clean.
Let the floods cross,
The distance in your eyes...
Give me reason,
To fill this hole,
Connect the space between.
Let it be enough,
To reach the truth that lies,
Across this New Divide.
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